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Gary L Taylor's avatar

I really liked that. The way it turned and the atmosphere were fantastic. Great work.

Cailin's avatar

thank you so much…I’m glad you liked it

John Strain's avatar

After, no laughter. Before scoffs and of course laughts. Wisdom comes from hard times.

Cailin's avatar

I really have to try my hand at the thriller and horror instead of everything ending so sweetly....they really should have fallen into three large baby bird mouths....LOL

pm's avatar

Perfectly Marvelous🤩🤩long silhouette 👻 Worm candies 😋haha I'm only present at evening and night (you made me 😂)😁 I don't know why this PM belongs to me 😂by any chance... That's brilliantly written by you💫💫💫🤗 it's so funny n awesome tale💛💛💛lots of love💙Keep going on💫

Cailin's avatar

Again thank you…I’m beginning to think you might actually have liked it…🤣

pm's avatar

Haha 💛💛Actually I liked it💛💛💛

HVR - James's avatar

That was a fun trip to take. Loved it.

Cailin's avatar

Thank you

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

This was such a whimsical story, I love it entirely, omg 🫶🏻✨

Cailin's avatar

thank you….I hope I did you well….

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

You did very well, very nice, it’s like a studio ghilbi story 🤩

Cailin's avatar

I couldn't think of a good fruit to replace Kiwi with so I chose Dragonfruit....never had it myself however.....

Kiwi’s Stories's avatar

I think dragonfruit was a good choice! I’ve only ever had the yellow one, and they don’t have much flavor, but it’s the closest thing I would also think of that matches a kiwi haha

Alicia's avatar

I thought this was going one way and then... smack! It got a little dark and a lot strange real quick. Awesome story, Cailin!! I loved it.

Cailin's avatar

You do realize you are in the story....😁

Alicia's avatar

🤯🤯!!! Was I Alice?? OMG… no, I did not! That’s so cool, Cailin!!!! Thank you. (That’s funny, ‘cause I have a thing about worms…) 🤣🤣🤣

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Love me an amazing fairy tale! 🥰

Cailin's avatar

thank you I’m so glad you liked it

AsukaHotaru's avatar

I lost it at the candy-worm misunderstanding..! Honestly..! 🫣 I was already nervous, then my brain did this tiny stupid giggle and backed away at the same time.

Cailin's avatar

LOL….I’m glad you liked it

PancakeSushi's avatar

Love it!

PM (Perfectly Marvelous) and the Inn Between 😂

Cailin's avatar

Thank you….you so good at picking up the coded names thank you

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

had a fairy tale sense to it

Charlie Walls's avatar

Very nice!!

Cailin's avatar

Thank you....

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Cailin's avatar

Thank you for reading...I'm glad you enjoyed it